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九戒
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作者：九戒 在 罕见奇谈 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org
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作者: 九戒 帮芦笛改英文 1/28/2003 05:57 [Click:96]
芦笛的原文
【Yeah, why not? I adore your determination. It is a terrible job to have a family and only idiots want them. Wife is all right. I do not have anything personal against having a wife, or more than one wives for that matter. But having children is an entirely different matter. It just the worst nightmare one could possibly have. After you become a father, many times you just want to put your child back to his/her mother's womb. Believe me, I am serious. So I believe the best thing a man has to do is to go sterilize himself, become a Mormon, marry as many women as he can support and have no children at all.】
Yeah, why not? I adore your determination. It is a terrible job
to have a family and only idiots want them. Wife is all right.
I do not have anything personal against having a wife, or more
than one wife for that matter. But having children
is an entirely different matter. It would be just the
worst nightmare one could possibly have. After you become a father,
many times you just want to put your child back to his/her mother's
womb. Believe me, I am serious. So I believe the best thing a man
can do is to go to sterilize himself, become a Mormon,
marries as many women as he can support and has no
children at all.
以上一共是6个错。
“把那些不定式一一改成动词单数第三人称”是我的错，
但它的起因是我没看出你在这句中的另一个更愚蠢的错误：
“So I believe the best thing a man has to do is to go sterilize himself,
become a Mormon, marry as many women as he can support and
have no children at all.”
现将你的错误简化为：
“the best thing is A, B, C and D.”
明白了吧？
而且， 我在半小时后纠正了这个错误：
作者: 九戒 最后一句， 按他的原意也许应该如此： 1/28/2003 06:31 [Click:39]
So I believe the best things a man can do are to go to
sterilize himself, become a Mormon, marry as many women as he can support
and have no children at all.
再看你的另一狡辩:
"改动GO GET YOURSELF STERILIZED只说明你丝毫不熟悉口语，如果
你看过两部以上的原文片，就该听见这种说法。那真是到处都是，
不光美国人如此说，英国、澳大利亚人无不如此说，如今有谁还
说GO AND GET。。。或GO TO GET。。。？大概只有你这种从书本
上学英文的人还这么说吧。你真在美国么？怎么会不知道活的英语，
只知道书上学来的死语言？"
错了就错了, 偏说自己是在写口语，干吗不说自己在溅唾沫！
一个人犯错误并不可怕， 可怕的是死不认错！
我在上面犯了个错， 它说明了我是人，而不是神。
知错就改是一个人， 特别是一个男人的不可多得的优良品质。
你所缺少的正是这种优良品质。
作者：九戒 在 罕见奇谈 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org |
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