nunia
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作者：nunia 在 寒山小径 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org
here's a dissenting voice:
I read this piece of trash, and then ... everything came out of me the wrong way, and I'm talking about starting at the stink that rings my anal annulus, to the dessicated turds that sat fermenting in my catastrophic colon, to the various boluses which were roiling down my small itchy intestine, to the pancreatic stains in my disastrous duodenum, to the calamitous mixture bellying in my scourge stomach, to the mucous which rained down my evil esophagus. It all came out in an express train of fetor, as a profound rejection of the digestive process, inspired from the mind and transformed into the ultimate regurgitative act.
In short, it made me puke. A lot.
Please don't ever dare to form words upon a page or screen again. Do not ever again seek to inflict such upon the unsuspecting hordes of Man. There is evil in the world, but no such things ever deserve to be treated to your prose. Woe!
I had once seen casually-tossed monkey spunk, jetted onto black fur, that seemed to form words ... and that was more readable and contextual than what you wrote. I urge you to stop. Stop, before true sorrow returns to the world.
To which, my respond is "your pet-peeve is noted." But it is a valid concern i am fully aware of ... imagery can cage enlightenment and so is new patterns in music compositions, breaking the old, caging in the new desire ...
And what they are up against 'poetic convention' surely ought to draw attention of the next poet in line...
作者：nunia 在 寒山小径 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org |
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论诗的出神入画与诗意的跳跃，变迁
